Adorable and heartbreaking, face at the end kind of ruined it though. I liked it though.
Adorable and heartbreaking, face at the end kind of ruined it though. I liked it though.
Did the fart sound make up for it?
You need a better microphone setup so you get less static in the background. Could also work on animation skills over time so things like Posh cat's paw moving don't look funky.
Ok thanks I know :)
This was a dramatic yet sad piece of work.
The art style seemed to have a sad look to it and seeing everything eventually fade with time as he slowly goes depressed in the afterlife wishing he could talk to anyone, have some to listen. Just being able to see something other than books seems like it would bring peace to the poor soul.
The audio is very clear. The echo added near the end as the static begins to kick in adds a sense of sadness. It leaves one wondering why he ended it all. However, the message is clear, even if one is sad, there is always someone out there who will listen to you and try to help.
Overall, sad piece and the message gives one hope at the end.
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thanks for the awesome review =D
I laughed so hard at how quickly that turned sour for him.
The art style is really nice and makes me think of older cartoons on Newgrounds that looked simpler. Got to love how when he was asked to write down "069" he ended up drawing a penis instead and starts to freak out over it as well.
The audio is very clean and good to hear. I like how the phone voice sounds filtered and as if it was coming from an actual phone. The voices were hilarious.
Overall, nice short piece, hilarious.
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You're very sweet.
The idea seems pretty nice but way too short. The credits seem to be longer than the animation itself.
Animation seemed smooth. I think part two should have more time spent and making it longer, give a story to it, why is the hot dog there, how did the guy come to find it and other stuff. Would not be a bad idea to practice shading as well.
The audio was alright I think. Nothing too special, should try to find some stuff in the audio portal, always plenty of music that can be used.
Overall, way too short but still funny.
Thanks for tips,reviews and stuff.Thank for the rating too.
This is not too bad from practice. Aside from not making his left arm move very much, you seemed to do everything else fine. Nice to see you turned practicing in SFM into a little comedy short, always nice for motivating I think.
Thank you, I kept trying different things with the arm, but having it stay locked seemed like the best way to look like him/me didn't know what we were doing. I thought about having both arms locked behind him, it looked pretty funny, but I thought it was more amusing to have only one arm he somehow doesn't know how to operate. Also, I wanted to make sure that when he went into full sprint it would seem more extreme than his previous running buildup.
Way too short but I think this was still funny.
The voice acting was nice. While the one voice sounded fine, the other sounded like the person was closer to the microphone when he was speaking.
The animation was nice and the graphics were good. For some reason, it reminds me of Beavis and Butthead, not sure why but it does. Really like the shading of the two characters.
Overall, not too bad.
Hey thanks, this voice clip was actually recorded a couple years back, I was going through all my old voice clips and felt like animating this one, even though the audio is a bit off! Even though it was short it still took me all day to animate, was good practice :)
Every time I watch it, it gets funnier.
everytime i watch you, my boner increases <3
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