Nicely done
It sounds really nice for a piano only song here, I do like this. It kind of feels like it was telling a small sad story showing a kid riding the bus. He gets to school and almost everyone treats him like crap and then he gets home and feels the same effect from his family as he hides away from society.
He hangs out with people who only pretend to like him hoping for entertainment as well. In the end they all abandon him and he moves far away from it. He hones his skills to being flexible, nimble, and able to knock out foes quickly. he lives alone for a long time before a girl comes and finds him two years later.
He would have been a senior this year but no one cared. For that one spark of a moment he feels happy to see the girl and she feels slightly happy to meet him. She takes him home with her, helps shave his face and body and gives him some of her clothes to wear until she gets paid and can buy him some clothes next month.
He shakes his head at the clothes she buys him and slowly begins to learn to speak again stating he had grown use to wearing only female clothes and that he did not care what people thought of his looks any more. They hug each other and he cries as he has a sibling and a friend for the first time in his life. They lay down that night in their separate beds in the same room.
Thoughts rush through his head of how life used to be. He looked at his long hair that went down to his nipples then over at his new sibling and friend and smiled before falling asleep.
Overall, very beautiful song.
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