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A little improved

I see you changed it a tad bit in the intro from the last time. This can still be improved I think though.

Animation/Storyline: Bunnykill characters and an M&M guy, apparently who woke Smoke up and he starts to cuss him out since he magically got Tourettes somehow when he wakes up. I noticed you zoomed in on his face a bit and showed detail for one of the eyes and the mouth while he was speaking which seems to be pretty nice I guess.

Audio: First it was a soft silly tune and then he wakes up and sounds like Tourette's guy, you hear him fall from his chair and throwing his sunglasses at Snowball.

Overall: If you like Bunnykill then you could always create your own characters to use, even though you say this took a month I think if you sped the process a bit and put a bit more heart and effort into this then it could go a little farther as well, nice effort anyways.

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Avojaifnot responds:

I may add subtitles and stuff like that

Lacks a lot

Storyline: Mario is about to finish the level and is sniped by Master Chief who then takes the flag and somehow it magically ends back up on the stick and he somewhat humps Mario.

Audio: Kind of meh since I couldn't hear the songs too well but heard the sound effects just fine.

Animation: Sprites, I know you're attempting these only until you get good with flash but it doesn't happen magically, instead of just using pre-done sprites try to create some of your own sprites instead. A UPS Mario and Orange Master Chief could have proved to be amusing and the dimensions for width were a little messed up as well.

Overall: I really don't see why these types of flashes are popular, yes I see a lot that were worked on greatly but this didn't seem to make the cut too awful great, it was far too short. Also the sprites were kind of dull, as in THESE are the kind of sprites I see all the time.

Hopefully you can improve in the future, so-so animation here.

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yoshiblue1733 responds:

SCTE3

Thanks for the submission, I have benefited from this review. This was a first submission for myself and I completely agree with you, it is surprising to see many fans of this type of work.

Cheers!

Kind of meh..

Animation: Indeed you've gone through improving over time but you can still do a lot of improvement. As for the sprite section could have added a bit extra to both characters to give them a little bit more of a custom feel to it. The Hobb from Calvin and Hobb seemed to be alright for decent animating.

Storyline: Pretty much just you showing us three steps you've gone through in animating, learning, pixels, and finally just animating without use of pixels what so ever. Seems to be alright I guess.

Audio: Seemed to be fitting for only the second part with pixels, the music just before credits was certainly odd but made me giggle for a moment.

Overall: Even though these are phases you've been through you can still improve heavily.

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JPB responds:

Thanks, i just wanted to see what people actually thought about my animation, since the score lies a lot sometimes...
as for adding to the characters in the sprite part, i've actually made the twomp an angry faic twomp, but i guess that people didnt really noticed that, although i understand what you mean...
--thanks

Sinister and eerie

Storyline: Really get the feel it's in modern time in a remotely controlled area no one else can go to. Apparently the investigation of an unknown creature or something like that. It just pops up everywhere at random. O_O

Animation: Very nice detail, like how the effort is put straight into it and made to look highly disturbing.

Audio: very fitting and creepy

Overall: No improvements needed.

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PBass responds:

Thanks for the review! You're right it does take place at a remotely controlled area called Site 19. They have hundreds more creatures and objects there that they experiment and test on. http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com containts a huge list of articles on them. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Silly but nice

Animation/storyline

Apparently he had to go hunting for something and accidentally killed his friend instead I see or he died or something along those lines then he came back to life and they had a nice meal.

Audio
I liked the choice of background music, very soothing and silly at the same time, very nice job, also great voice acting as well.

Overall
I see no improvements needed here and I enjoyed this a lot, very nice flash and story.

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Rutger responds:

Well they went looking for Zofra herbs but Whokko got killed by a monster D:
Thanks!

Wonderful

Storyline
He seems to just be simply bringing happiness to a planet filled with pain, misery, sorrow, dullness. Then the sun comes out and makes everything the way it should be, decent concept to me.

Animation
This was almost perfect to me but the helmet breathing part looks like a beak instead of where he is breathing instead, if it hadn't been for that this could have gone so much smoother. Everything else went splendid.

Audio choice
Pretty nice, before happiness was a metal song and after happiness was a calm and happy tune.

Overall
Just change that thing from beak to breathing spot.

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urban-wolf100 responds:

Thanks for the review SCTE3,
im gonna fix the breathing mask today, shoudnt be too hard :)

Wasn't all that good

I understand where you're coming from in saying everyone should think their father is strong and everything, but it seems to over exaggerate quite a large amount. It was a small time consumed to watch it but I think you could have done a little bit better in making this.

I didn't see a story to it which I understand there as none, just some large black father tossing something extremely far like you can in the Super Smash Bros. saga. The graphics didn't seem to be that special but seemed to be an OK effort to me, I see you've done other work but you could spend a little more time in creating story lines and possibly doing all your flashes from scratch without the help of sprites.

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naronic responds:

THANK YOU
i was waiting for someone to respond to that!

I'm finally glad someone understands theres no story involved
this was just a comback for the beginning of the summer though
nothing special

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