NekoMika's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SLOD #1.]

Pretty sweet loop

The epiliptic background just made it whole lot better actually. Nice how you ended making all the characters involved playing a different sound. I'm guessing the cutout was Timmy? The music was actually a whole lot better than the animation in some ways.

However with the characters the song would have no taste or awesome feel to it. Great job on this. Would like to see more of these done. Also cool beat.

tehslaphappy responds:

The cutout was actually Jon, the guy who made the beat for this. Yeah, we just did this out of boredom, and to our surprise, it was good. Thanks for the review!

[Fusushi Tuna]

No chance against Fushigi!

The layered paper look over the whole flash looked pretty cool and gave it an old chinese look as well. The animating seemed to be alright for the most part. I didn't see anything special done here either.

The story was kind of odd as every "CHOZEN 1" was killed by the fushigi tuna over time and so was grasshopper. Pretty weird how instead of ganging up on it they just gave in and became slaves to those weird oversized monsters.

The only bad thing about this flash was the audio. You could have spoken up a bit actually so I could understand everything instead of making people turn up the speakers. Aside from that you did a pretty good job on this flash actually.

Good luck on future pieces and please speak up.

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The-Mercenary responds:

I can easily fix the audio, and thanks :)

[Richard Guts | Short]

Alright for starters

I guess this was ok for a starting flash but it seemed to be lacking in sound and having a bit longer storyline. The animation seemed to be ok though. The guy looked funny and where did the stitches on his head come from? I guess I would rather not know at all.

The short storyline seemed to be OK. He waved and then a line fell creating a flower that splashed water at his face. Not much of a storyline to me. How come the flower squirted him and the such? Try to add more to it so it grabs the viewer's attention.

Overall, really short and no sounds, not much to keep a viewer entertained at all. Good luck in the future.

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Struggle responds:

I realize the link got added in to the weekly review requests (which is where you probably clicked the link), but the original post said:
"Hey guys, I'm wondering if some people could review a flash i submitted a couple months ago that didn't really get much attention as far as feedback, which is what i was looking for.
Now, i realize that it's short and needs sound, story, etc. Like it says in the description, I hadn't touched flash for a long time and this was just a test of sorts.
What i'm looking for is advice/criticism on my drawing and animation style. What could I improve on? What looks good?"

Thanks for the response though!

[Mario Anime's REAL Ending]

Funny

Liked the references to Final Fantasy VII and Dragon Ball Z as well. The animation was alright except for Peach's arms. Could have animated those few frames a bit further with making them have an outline at the elbows. The music was pretty good as well.

I think I liked this ending far better than the anme film's ending where Bowser begins to work at Mario's old job as a cashier with goombas. Animation was still pretty good overall though. The choice in music kind of made me laugh a bit as well.

Overall, a good piece of work. Good luck on your next project.

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MCYoshi responds:

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[My best and last flash]

Poorly done

I have to say for something that was only 25 kb I was expecting it to load quickly and instead I get met with two screens of loading bars and then I have to watch a very poorly done flash. The only humorous part of this was the loading bars since as soon as one got done loading a new frame with two of them showed up.

The small flash itself wasn't even funny to me. This just seems to be something you slapped together in about five minutes with little to no thought put into it. As far as the whole thing goes the loading bar gets you hyped but then the small animation is a let down.

My suggestions are to go the flash tutorial section of the site and learn a bit more about animating and to slow down and spend more time working on it. If you actually put some effort into it and spend some time on it instead of calling people dumb for watching it you could have a bit of potential.

Overall, go back and learn a bit more of flash and spend some more time working on making a bigger and longer flash.

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Kieran123 responds:

:'( I spent three years on this.

[Produce Prank Day]

Simple and funny

This was actually very simplistic yet very funny at the same time. Apparently that was an endless little bag since it quickly filled up that guy's house. I didn't quite understand what the letter said though. However it appears the trickster was just being mean and funny for the holidays along with squeezing his rubber nose and banging on the door.

The audio accompanied it was very nice as well and the flash flowed along with the music just nicely as well. The animation was well done so kudos on that. You appear to have been in the spirit of things when you worked on this. Good and short little laugh anyways.

Overall, this is a nice piece. Will be sure to recommend it for the Christmas section.

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[R.O.C. Ep002]

Very lacking

First I would like to say you could seriously do some size reducing for the flash. Instead of whatever size you were using, you should make it 1/4 the size so the flash doesn't have as much blank space. There was almost no humor in it (or at least nothing I found funny). That and I didn't see the fridge and freezer anywhere. Just a vending machine in the background.

On another note if you were able to open this in flash you could have at least tried to remove the watermark in the corner so it looked a bit better and upped the quality until it was closer to 10 MB in size. Also the voices were bland. Instead of the generated voices you could have tried to use your own voice instead.

Lastly I didn't really find this to be a good piece anyways. Maybe something that could kill a few moments of someones time and that's it really. Overall, try to learn a bit of flash and start from there, maybe you'll start to get better reviews as well.

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ninjadezombidetueur responds:

Im just sad that you didnt notice the fridge beside the water cooler.....lol.