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[The Sketch Collab 2009]

Impressive

Although it's all black and white doodling on line paper this seemed to have turned out pretty well. It got 4th place but it went completely unrecognized by most of the community overall as well.

Storyline: No true storyline, however each little skit seems to have it's own storyline. Most of them give a good chuckle while others seem to impress with what looks like lots of time having been put into such a small workspace.

Audio: A remix of Harder, better, faster, stronger, very nice.

Animation: Not much to say since it's many people instead of one person, lots of effort was put into this anyways.

Overall: No improvements needed, congrats.

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Timsplosion responds:

Thank you very much! :)

[A FBF Animation.]

It was alright

Although you are improving on animation quite a bit you can still improve I must say.

Storyline: No real plotline or anything, just a nice simple animation to relax the viewer.

Audio: Made me chuckle a bit but aside from that not much else.

Animation: It was OK I guess, there's always room for improvement.

Overall: Pretty good effort here, not bad.

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ForNoReason responds:

thank you

[60 Seconds of Awesome]

Pretty cool 10 seconds I guess

Had a pretty nice concept but imagine if you had strung them altogether as one very long and tediously awesome movie instead? That would have been a pretty nice little silly idea as well.

Animation: Seemed pretty cool considering I haven't seen that style in a while. Good details on the slow motion part in piece four though.

Storyline: Since I can't really sum them all up at once...

piece one: Calling up a guy just to shoot him dead, silly guy should have resisted the urge to pick it up. Oh well, he would have died anyway.

piece two: He throws a baseball and travels the world only to kill him by hitting him in the back of the skull, he must not know his own strength.

piece three: Smoking kills, enough said.

piece four: He can dodge one car but not the other due to sheer stupidity.

piece five: Watch where you skate.

piece six: Getting the ball in the hoop is not as easy as it looks.

Audio: All of them seemed very fitting but to me This Way DEMO seemed to be deemed most fitting with the attitude of each segment anyways. All the audio pieces were pretty cool.

Overall: Very nice little sketched animations, not much to fix, maybe a bit longer segments next time would be nice. Nice job.

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Emrox responds:

I originally had "this way" alone, but it's such an overused song. That's mainly why I tried to find other tunes, but they didn't fit QUITE as well.

[One Cold Christmas]

Stupid Santa

Very nice work.

Animation: Silly and seems like that of most average animators. It gives the feel during the intro of something amazing too for some reason. Almost like a real cartoon short opening where it shows who all helped with making it.

Storyline: Santa goes down the wrong chimney when he finds the child he screwed over years ago wakes to see Santa in front of him completely enraged and antics begin. Then at the end Santa knocks him down and beats the crap out of him. Then he throws al ump of coal at his son.

Audio: All very fitting at the appropriate moments actually.

Overall: No improvements are needed, very nice work on this flash very Christmas like in attitude and tone. Also the moral is don't screw with Santa.

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MrAbnormal responds:

Thats a very well thought out review. Thanks!

[Smoke's Rude Awakening]

A little improved

I see you changed it a tad bit in the intro from the last time. This can still be improved I think though.

Animation/Storyline: Bunnykill characters and an M&M guy, apparently who woke Smoke up and he starts to cuss him out since he magically got Tourettes somehow when he wakes up. I noticed you zoomed in on his face a bit and showed detail for one of the eyes and the mouth while he was speaking which seems to be pretty nice I guess.

Audio: First it was a soft silly tune and then he wakes up and sounds like Tourette's guy, you hear him fall from his chair and throwing his sunglasses at Snowball.

Overall: If you like Bunnykill then you could always create your own characters to use, even though you say this took a month I think if you sped the process a bit and put a bit more heart and effort into this then it could go a little farther as well, nice effort anyways.

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Avojaifnot responds:

I may add subtitles and stuff like that