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[Battle of the Best]

Good but lack of original plot

Seems to kind of have a spin off of DragonBall Z with they way they grew stronger when they got angry at each other. However Ken ends up killing Ryu in the end, oh well.

Animation: Sprites.

Audio: Dance of Death by Iron Maiden and Sandstorm by Darude, both are great songs anyway.

Storyline: Don't really know much aside from we just happened to join Ryu and Ken at the start of their fight and watch all the way up to Ryu's death at the end before one of them gets hit by a truck.

Overall: Might want to improve the storyline a bit, will take more time but will net you a better score overall. Also kind of noticed you tended to drag them a bit instead of giving them the correct sprites while hovering, oh well, I don't think they have hovering sprites.

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slick-sheep responds:

Yea, I actually had alot of sprites but sometimes you just dont have what you need, to do what you want, so you gotta work with what you got. I hope to improve on storyline in the future.

[Mario's Recital]

I hear that

I remember that piano as well, scared me shitless the first few times then I learned how to beat you, that was one scary piano.

Animation: Excellent tablet drawing skills, still you were able to draw quite well without one as well, great work on it.

Audio: Crowds cheering. A broken piano note that annoys Mario and the sound of a vicious man eating piano, lovely...

Storyline: People line up to hear Mario play on the piano only to see him devoured by it instead.

Overall: Excellent piece of work here, really enjoyed it.

[CoolJaw: O.S. II-V]

just as scary...

...as your first part, but at least you get teeth now, how were you able to speak?

Animation: Same as part I which is quite fitting.

Audio: A little different but just as creepy feeling it is.

Storyline: You discover you have cancer and only a few months to live and you get your teeth.

Overall: Nice creepy story so far.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Hello,

People without teeth can still speak, it just takes them a while to learn to do so...
which is why initially Colin couldn't speak.

Also this isn't about me, I'm pretty sure the characters name is mentioned a couple of times throughout the story.

Lastly the music is the exact same as in the previous submission.

Thanks for the review!
- Celx

[CoolJaw: O.S. I-V]

Creepy piece

The music just makes this feel even creepier, nice work here.

Animation: Frame by frame piecing of a horrendous nightmare you're having, quite gloomy.

Audio: Rather fitting and melancholy.

Storyline: You keep having a weird nightmare with monsters and you have no teeth after awakening from a coma.

Overall: Quite creepy and good.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool!

Thanks for the review,
- Celx

[Hurshnenglurper 2009]

Very short

even though I found this quite funny, it was really quite short, it should have been longer!!! Emphasis on longer, seriously.. nice attempt though.

Animation: It was pixelly but you did warn not to use that kind of flash saying it would look quite bad! However the end gave me a chuckle where you replaced the armor with food!

Audio: You used a large diversity of audio, bravo, bravo.

Storyline: There is no storyline, merely a bunch of short sketches that look liek they took awhile, not bad for pixel-like animation.

Overall: It was a great piece of work that maybe requires a bit more time and effort, great job!!

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Surn responds:

Glad you appreciate the candy armor bit.
Yah, I've been told to spend more time on my animation by someone else as well.
As for length I've got a couple ideas on some longer works (yet a few short ones as well). Thanks for reviewing!

[Intelligent Critique]

Silly review

I found that to be quite a funny review actually.

Aniamtion: A review for a background, and then you kept adding in little silly graphics here and there making fun of the review.

Audio: Using your own voice, amazing.

Storyline: There is none for it is a silly review that some one did and you voiced it.

Overall: Lack of creativity but still very funny.

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[Action Movie!]

Epiliptic warning much?

Could at least put a warning for people who suffer from epilipsy in the Author comments section, not that I suffer from it though, actually enjoyed the flashy coloring and whatnot.

Animation: Somewhat reminds me of other flash authors but this actually had pretty nice animation and the spinning never ends...

Audio: Running in the 90's-Max Coveri, always a good song.

Storyline: Someone trips causing a triangle with an eye to appear and spin in an epiliptic manner forever.

Overall: This is actually quite funny if you ask me, nice job!!

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[Magic Guts Power!]

Was quite funny

Animation: Actually very good for a mouse drawn piece of work, better than what some people do anyways.

Audio: Nice effects and hilarious song effects.

Storyline: He does some poses then gains powers from doing so. Then he flies into the air and destroys a pigface looking thing.

Overall: Wonderful job.

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topatisen responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it :).

[Ashura The Hedgehog Ep 1]

Pretty good

Animation: Sprites, oh well, sprites are always nice, Ashura was a beats, hur hur, nice one there, Alos like how he had red eyes, makes him a bit more evil.

Audio: Very fitting songs for the fights and credits.

Storyline: Ashura wants to destroy Sonic but others are getting in the way of him doing that.

Overall: Pretty good, could improve on the grammar but aside from that, very good job.

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