This isn't too bad for a first song. However the background synth could be removed since it sounded like another song was playing altogether when I first realized it was there in the background. Then as it started to rise in volume it sounded a lot better than when it was only in the background.
The main synth makes me think of a voice making a sound, has it clipped, looped and then added as a wonderful sounding synth that can be used. The bass is also good to hear since it seems really calm in the background.
The drums are nice and I like the kicks. The build up used later into the song was nice to listen to.
Overall, this song sounded fantastic. Nothing to really improve aside from the background synth near the start.
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