Ehh, needs major improvements
I must say, this needs major work and you possibly need a new mic and mixing system so the voice doesn't sound so distant as well. Also I just really hear the first sound a lot from the first 3 seconds, the rest isn't all that audible.
Voice/lyrics: Kind of doesn't make all that much since and I'd suggest a new microphone before making another song since at one or two points it kind of gets way too loud and scratchy and pop sounding. Change this up.
Ahh sound: I hear that a lot and it's pretty much one of the audible pieces here that sounds pretty good to me which is nice but I don't think that's the sound you were wishing to be heard overall eh?
Drum 'n' bass: Sounds pretty good and a simple beat but not audible enough to be heard well.
Scratch sound: Nice touch although you'd have to turn this up a bit to hear it when it enters the song at different intervals.
Overall: Get a new sound and mixing system so it's easier to hear. If you decide to resubmit a better version of this it'd be nice if you left this one up so people can do a side by side comparison and see if there s till needs to be any changes.
Good luck on future pieces.
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