Very touching piece
First off before I start a nice review of this I'm just going to recommend you move this to the "Voice acting" genre since it doesn't fit in the classical section to be honest. Very nice little tune though.
Is this you singing at all? If it is then it sounds lovely as well. The only real thing you could probably improve on is speak up a bit, add some fitting music in the background and extend it a bit, aside from all that this is nicely done.
Peaceful.
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