Too loud
That and there appears to be a lot of air sounds coming in as well. I would suggest backing away from the mic a bit and lower your voice a bit as well or at least modify the song to where it isn't as loud. Kind of makes my ears hurt as well.
On a side note, good attempt at singing a song anyway without background music.
Sounds nice
The intro has a bit crazy feel and then it becomes 8-bit with some extra zing added to it as well. The 8-bit feeling sound is cool since that's what most of it is anyway. The keyboard sounds quite funny actually but I like it like that I guess.
The drums are heavy and sporadic and sweet. The bass breakdown is cool along with the weird sounds coming in as well. Overall, this wasn't that bad of a song. Nice work on it.
Beautiful cover
Sounds the same as earlier but the lyrics can be heard which is nice. Kind of sounds beautiful for an orchestra cover. Reminds me a bit of Sonic the Hedgehog 2006 for some reason actually. The tune sounds very nice and beautiful as well.
The orchestra choir and sounds nice but when you scream it makes it seem unfitting for some reason actually. Nice sounding overall though, really like how it flows together until you scream. Nice work on this cover version. Looking forward to more in the future as well.
Review Request Club
Thanks again!
The thing about the screams is that in the original version there's some voice in the screams whereas in this one it's just scream. My throat doesn't agree with me when I try to put some voice behind the scream, so I almost immediately start coughing. So I just stuck with the scream, which at times does seem very unfitting.
Thanks for the review!
It is ok
It could be far more better I guess but it reminds me of the fight club stage in Tekken 5 a lot actually. Was there any real theme to this loop or was it just something that sounded good when you finished it? It sounds alright to me anyways.
Kind of makes me feel like I have to fight to survive strangely, good little beat though. It has a more industrial feel to it than a hip hop beat.
Review Request Club
thank for the review. yay i got the tekken feeling to from this.
Sexy vocals
The vocals sound strangely like you are trying to be sexy and whatnot. I wouldn't truly say this is a house song. I would put in the pop/hip hop/rap/dance sections instead. Since it sounds closer to one of them instead since you have vocals and most house songs I have heard don't have vocals in them often. Maybe something here and there and that's it.
The beat is pretty good and funky though. The funky feeling it delivers is very good though, it's awesome as well.
Very good job on this beat anyways. Sounds very nice as well. Nice work.
Review Request Club
it is alright I guess
It could be better if I could hear the vocals a bit better since I can not really understand what you are singing a lot of the time due to the after sound I keep hearing on it. Not a real problem, would just be nice if you had left your voice as it was since it probably would have sounded a lot better.
It sounds like you are singing about someone you loved but lost. I have been there. I know how it feels and it sucks. The guitar riff is great and sounds good to me. The drums are simple as are most of them that I hear. The bass is good and seems to have a bit of life to it. The keyboard is brilliant as well.
Overall, this is a beautiful song and all. I would just adjust the vocals so people might be able to hear you a bit better.
Review Request Club
Thanks for the review!
The song isn't originally by me, but by a band called Sonata Arctica, and they're pretty amazing.
First impressions of the song aren't what they seem either, like I said in the commentary, it's about a stalker's last moments with the woman he was stalking.
In regards to the vocals, i put on a helluva lot of reverb on it, which may be why it sounds the way it does.
Thanks for the review, it's much appreciated!
Interesting
The banjo at the start is very interesting to say the least and reminds e of the desert levels from Super Mario Bros. 3. The main beat is quite amazing though and I really like it a lot as well. The drums sound nice as well, kind of reminds me of Dobeck from Step Brothers playing his drums at the end with a simple start to them.
The vocals are cool and enjoyable when they do appear in the song which is cool. The banjo just sounds incredible with the beat overall though, really amazes me since it seems you put a lot of heart and effort into this beat. The keyboard wind instrument sound is like the cherry on top. It makes it even better.
Overall, this is a very good beat, nice work on it. Looking forward to more in the future as well.
Review Request Club
Lol at "banjo". It's an Okinawan Sanshin, but people often thought it was some sort of primitive banjo when they saw me play it. Then again, people also thought my mandolin was a banjo or a ukulele (both of which are nothing like mandolin so it was rather funny).
I've never seen Step Brothers so I'll have to look for this scene.
Thanks for your review!
Sounds good
This has a somewhat ambient feel but also kind of sounds like Linkin Park as well. I just don't hear any vocals but seeing as you plan to add them very soon then it should sound great to hear and review all over again in the near future as well. The guitar sounds kind of like a DJ grabbed it and kept spinning it back a bit for a cool effect to it.
The keyboard sounds very nice and kind of like it had a voice at certain parts which is nice I guess. The bass tends to be a bit too loud at certain parts as well which I guess isn't a real problem for most people. The drum beat sounds cool and I like them.
Kind of gives me a feel as if I am all alone for some reason or another. Overall, very good song, looking forward to hearing it with vocals in the near future.
Review Request Club
Musician / Voice Actor, I write music, c:
Age 31, Female
Joined on 7/19/05
Singing ;D