NekoMika's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meko, Brace Face]

This is rather cute. Only thing that could really make it any better is if you added a background to it.

[what happened at E3 nintendo]

Really like how Nintendo kept with the idea of having fun and letting the players have fun as they always have. Awesome artwork!

[SCTE3]

I find this to be quite nice to look at. The only thing that feels slightly off is the foot in front seems a little skinnier than the left paw behind it. Other than that, looks cute.

Rad responds:

You're totally right, I really do need to work harder on drawing animals, the raised foot is much skinnier and could do with some bulking up to make it look the same size as the left paw.

Thank you so much for your critique, I'll be sure to improve as much as I can for next time!

[Stizgsita]

She looks fantastic. My only question is, where is her nose supposed to be? Also, not sure why I keep thinking her right arm looks a bit off. I also like how the sun and clouds are make of cookies. Give the entire place a cute and sugary look to it. Nice to see her hands and feet have what appear to be chocolate mittens and socks on unless those what her hands and feet actually look like.

Overall, really cute look to it.

[Zone-Tan]

This looks really nice. the only thing I can think of that would make this stand out more is if the background was moving. Such as having the logo heads moving diagonal, left to right, vice versa, etc. Would make this very nice and entertaining to look at.

The Zone logos are perfect and don't seem to be in any need of changing at all.

As for Zone herself, I kind of get the feeling the left side (of the image) of her shirt should be down a bit lower. Seems like it would fit a little more having one side down a bit farther than the other.

As for the tentacles, nice to see they have a bit of slime (or cum?) showing that she has her friend ready to play with her or whatever else Zone decides to draw up.

Overall, aside from my thoughts on her shirt. Looks fantastic!

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EventHorizon responds:

Another great review SCTE3!, I thank you for the review and for the advice, are very useful and I'm glad you liked this design! :D

[Marmer]

Saddest comic I have read in a long time. The fact it hits pretty close to home for most pet owners when their pet is slowly dying and when they can not do anything for it except try to make them as comfortable as possible.

Beautiful, sad, and very emotional.

[Clarice Explosion]

Well, it is a slight improvement at least.

The first thing I notice right away with the image are the guns and shadow.

First the shadow shouldn't even look that way. The shadow shows her legs going in two different directions rather than lining up with her legs and up to where the dress begins. The shadow for her legs just do not make much sense.

The guns, I can't tell if she has the triggers pulled all the way, the bullets fired off and she's still holding them for no reason or if you didn't add the triggers for the guns. The gun on the right... somehow it just does not look right, whether it be the handle of it, the odd thing sticking out from the top or just how it looks overall.

The explosion seems to look alright, slightly off the ground, so I am going to take a guess something large blew up in the background after being tossed into the air and almost touching the ground. With the explosion as it is, this bit goes with the shadow, it should be making the shadow lining up with her legs rather than making the shadow legs look like they are opening up.

The slight dark flare to the left of the shadow seems decent enough, however it should look just about the same for the right side rather than a dark little area. Also, with the explosion, there should be a slight wind either blowing her hair slightly to the side or to the front of her sides if she is close enough to the explosion. Should also be a slight amount of dirt/dust moving in the background.

Clarice's hair needs to look a bit messy since I doubt it would stay perfect as it is near an explosion while walking away from one. Her sunglasses, acceptable. The cigarette however, should be showing a slight amount of smoke to it given there is a bit of black at the tip of it. Her arms look alright given the lighting is coming from behind her; same goes for her legs.

The collar/choker she has looks good but what is with the long red piece hanging from it down into her breasts? Is it an aesthetic look or just a technical goof or what? The dress itself seems to be good but like her arms, it should be with good shading, looking closely it seems a brush was taken and just doodling in the shaded area. Take her heels for example, nicely shaded to go with the lighting from the explosion, should try to work on the dress that way to make it look cleaner. The reverse looking "z" on the dress doesn't look very good on her dress.

Overall, improving, just have to practice over time and improve your art style.

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