Very lacking
First I would like to say you could seriously do some size reducing for the flash. Instead of whatever size you were using, you should make it 1/4 the size so the flash doesn't have as much blank space. There was almost no humor in it (or at least nothing I found funny). That and I didn't see the fridge and freezer anywhere. Just a vending machine in the background.
On another note if you were able to open this in flash you could have at least tried to remove the watermark in the corner so it looked a bit better and upped the quality until it was closer to 10 MB in size. Also the voices were bland. Instead of the generated voices you could have tried to use your own voice instead.
Lastly I didn't really find this to be a good piece anyways. Maybe something that could kill a few moments of someones time and that's it really. Overall, try to learn a bit of flash and start from there, maybe you'll start to get better reviews as well.
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