This is probably one of the worst things I have heard in awhile, it seems like you had an idea in mind of where you wanted to go and then just... decided not to make even a decent rhythm to work with? Most death metal songs have at least some barebones idea of a rhythm going on instead of just banging everything as fast and as loud as possible.
Maybe you improved at some point long after this was released but still, this is a pretty bad track honestly.