Sounds very nice
The tune seems to be rather calming and really nice, can't wait to hear the vocal version, this tune like most others feels as if it holds a story to it as well, I really like that in music. This kind of music tends to lean closer to what I like, your band sounds very wonderful as well.
For being a first half of a song it doesn't seem to bad anyways, I'd love to hear a solo in this song for the second half, maybe 25 seconds long for the solo then continue to a main beat, very wondrous job, looking forward to hearing more from you. =]
SCTE3